One Complete Manuscript

One Complete Manuscript
Image: Ranse Parker

Over the past few days I imposed internet silence on my activities in order to focus on one important task: completing the manuscript of GREENER IS THE GRASS. And last night, I finished it.

It’s a crashing wave of excitement, relief and achievement that hits when one completes a full manuscript—novella or full novel—because of the work that goes into it. The book, which was conceived during an earthquake while on holiday in Rhodes in 2008, has had many rewrites, but interestingly enough only by red-penning it was I able to remove a further 12 pages from the total count. That’s 12 pages of surplus words, indulgent prose and tightened sentences.

So now two things happen: 1) I contact my trusted readers to see if any of them are willing to be the first to put eye to paper 2) I get fired into my next incomplete manuscript, which in this case, is BACCARA BURNING.

So what a weekend it was. As you can tell, most of my time was spent working on GREENER, ploughing through all the red marks, making changes, reading, re-reading and applying my strictest head of editorial logic. Aside from that there were a few other things to catch up on.

On Friday night I attended the 60th birthday party of the mother of a friend in the Queen Charlotte Rooms in Leith. If you remember, I was exhausted after a very long week and didn’t really fancy it, but after a long shower, bowl of carbonara and a couple of cold pints of Tennent’s Lager, I was feeling much like my old self. So much so, I found myself enjoying the delights of the Jägermeister monster before the night was out.

Saturday was a day spent entirely in the confines of my home, tidying and writing—writing hard not just on GREENER but also on the final assignments of the story building workshop at the Muse Online Writers’ Conference. I have a fully fledged short story, which with a bit of polishing will be prime meat for a hungry crime or thriller magazine.

The methods I’ve learned over the last week from expert tutor, Devon Ellington, will serve me well. So very often do I get ideas for great scenes, that sometimes never get seen again as they disappear back into the ether or into a page in my notebook. Using this new method, I can write out the scene and then work on it to flesh out a full story. I just know it’s going to be a valuable weapon in my writing arsenal.

Sunday I nipped up town for a break and a coffee, and then spent the whole day working on the manuscript. A pretty solid writing workout I’m sure you’ll agree, and with NaNoWriMo in the offing very much a good thing. To let my hair down, I topped the day off with an amazing lamb madras from The Prince Balti House.

My fiction priorities for the remainder of the month are now to start work on a new draft of BACCARA, set myself up for NaNoWriMo, and complete the short story from the Muse Conference.

Until the morra!

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About Colin Galbraith

Thriller author, music fan, St Mirren fan, fluff chucker, rabbit tamer, outstanding fake faller. Loves cannoli.
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3 Responses to One Complete Manuscript

  1. Diane says:

    I love how positive and productive you’re sounding these days. Twas only a few short months ago that you were stuck in the doldrums, and now look. I’m really happy for you.

    I’m wishing I’d done that course with you last week now. I bet Devon’s a great tutor, very motivational. I love her book, 5 stories in 10 weeks. Whenever I’m stuck, I always go back to that.

    I can’t keep away from the distraction of the internet. If I go for a drive into the real back of beyond where there’s not even a mobile phone signal, then I can just about manage it, but I get withdrawal … I’ll pre-schedule something to the blog if I have the time as an added incentive to not need to go online.

  2. So glad to contribute another weapon to your writing arsenal!

    I love the story you developed — can’t wait to see where it lands.

    Best wishes for GREENER, too!

  3. Colin says:

    Thanks Diane and Devon.

    Diane – I still use Devon’s ‘5 in 10’ – anything that can give you a new perspective on what you’re writing can only help. Thanks for all your support – it’s really appreciated.

    Devon – My arsenal grows bigger every day, lol! Thanks, too, for your support.

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